In A Short History of Writing Instruction,
James Berlin states that English studies have “been at the center of the
educational experience in this country, constituting one of the few
requirements for all students in the grades.”
Now I am sure that every teacher likes to think that his/her subject
matter is the cornerstone of education, but it seems that without the ability
to read or write it would be difficult to instruct anything at all. So much of our educational system in the
United States was developed with the notion of how best to instruct
writing. Theories on this have come and
gone, but the focus has always been on producing the types of learners that
will most benefit society. That type of
learner today is one that can draw on technology to communicate with a much
larger audience than one could have even dreamt of thirty years ago.
The value
of writing is very clear, yet this process that requires an understanding of
rules and structure, order and logic, cause and effect is met with much
resistance from the majority of students.
Young writers are not grasping how this process will make them a
well-rounded student. Janet Emig stated
that, “writing serves learning uniquely because writing as process-and-product
possesses a cluster of attributes that correspond uniquely to certain powerful
learning strategies.” I have seen this
in action as I have read through the research articles I have been collecting
over the past month. When I sit down to
write about this information, I begin to see it in a new light. I am no longer reading for information, but I
am processing that information in a way that allows me to reflect on where I
was prior to the writing process and what I will now do with this information
in the future. A big part of this has to
do with my interest in becoming a better teacher. This motivation helps me along the reading
and writing process. All students need a
motivation of some sort. There must be a
way that educators can tap into the student’s interest in technology to
successfully teach the structural components that often cause students to
resist participating in this powerful process.
Too often,
teachers resist the use of technology in instructional methods because they
feel that the traditional approach that they were instructed in is the only way
to teach. I remember when I was in high
school and not allowed to use calculators in math classes. It was so extreme that students were
suspended for having calculator watches.
By my senior year of high school, there was a paradigm shift, and
teachers allowed students to use calculators on math problems. Now, the problems students can solve with
calculators far surpass anything students were doing while I was in school. Current technology has the potential to do
the same thing for writing.
This leads
me to the reading selection I would like to fully analyze, Chapter 4 of Engaging Ideas by John Bean. One of the biggest challenges in my classroom
is what Bean identifies as “students not taking pride in their writing and
seeing themselves as having ideas important enough to communicate.” It seems that once students have enough
passion and dedication to the writing process in general, many of the perceived
errors that occur will take care of themselves.
Creating that passion becomes the trick.
This is where I think technology can play a significant part. Blogs are popular ways to get the ideas a
writer cares about out to a large audience.
I would hope that students would be motivated to have better habits of
editing and proofreading if they knew their writing would be viewed by a larger
market of their peers. This could also
reinforce Haswell’s system of “minimal marking” that Bean indorses. The notion of withholding a grade until the
writing is free of as many errors as possible is intriguing to me and could
easily fit into an online forum. The
only problem I see would be in determining at what point the student paper is
deemed suitable for a grade. No paper
can ever be perfect, and if errors are connected to stylistic choices when does
the writing reach a finishing point? In
any case, I now see that I was trying to do too much when it comes to teaching
writing. I need to help my students
advocate for themselves if I truly what to improve their writing skills. I hope to come to some more specific conclusions
and answer some of my questions as I continue to research.

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